Would you rather see a (okay my) chapbook title like this:
Assay of proof (the secret still secretly
known is secret) while we wandered along
the material side, material structures,
breadth & depth--constantly moving one to
the next, the inner space & expected
light--all the dead long for vision.
or one phrase or word from above text such as:
Expected Light
I'm almost done with the chapbook I have been working on this semester but I am having a hard time deciding on the title. Any suggestions would be much appreciated.
More pictures of artwork soon as well as other poetry goodies.
1 comment:
Expected Light is pretty brilliant (and not just semi-literally). I don't think I like the long title much at all.
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